HERE'S TO BEING MYSELF...UNCUT,UNASHAMED,UNFRAID!
Nice to have you back :-)Happy New Year
the fragments of the past we've left behind...loved it.happy new year.
@ashy; hehe, i feel special:)happy new year!@L.A; you just helped me confirm that i aint crazy....thanks.
Love the poem. Well, executed:A thought provoking opening and an enticing end to go with it.The enticing here being of thought and emotion.I also think the enjambment/run-on lines were done well.The end of every line leads the reader on to the next line of thought. Ah!This is what I miss about free verse: boundless exploits of ideas on paper.
liking it, a lot. Feather
Nice to have you back :-)
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the fragments of the past we've left behind...loved it.
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@ashy; hehe, i feel special:)happy new year!
ReplyDelete@L.A; you just helped me confirm that i aint crazy....thanks.
Love the poem. Well, executed:A thought provoking opening and an enticing end to go with it.The enticing here being of thought and emotion.
ReplyDeleteI also think the enjambment/run-on lines were done well.The end of every line leads the reader on to the next line of thought.
Ah!This is what I miss about free verse: boundless exploits of ideas on paper.
liking it, a lot. Feather
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